- Not sure it needs to say JAY in the middle of the page, instead make your first line bigger, then the Tib St line becomes a sub- heading.
- Barcode much too big,
- Date needs to be at the top near masthead so audience can see they are getting up to date information.
- Needs an accent colour to make key info and unique selling points stand out on the shelf.
Great! :) make "free view" a contrasting colour so it stands out to audience on the news stand, barcode can be smaller and put dates of first and last day guide is valid at the top e.g, 4th-11th November so it's clear to audience what they're getting for their money. Well done :)
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