There are some experimental features in this version such as the tune to "Tib Street" at the start and end which I would like feedback on to decide whether to keep them.
Tib St music should bridge over establishing shot in bar to anchor location and give a strong regional ID. Music is tense but the :boom" doesn't match the edit- should be when Tom slams through the door- cut out the chase up the stairs, you'll see it will have more impact. Some of your edits are a bit too long as well like when you are chasing Tim down the corridor.
Tib St music should bridge over establishing shot in bar to anchor location and give a strong regional ID. Music is tense but the :boom" doesn't match the edit- should be when Tom slams through the door- cut out the chase up the stairs, you'll see it will have more impact. Some of your edits are a bit too long as well like when you are chasing Tim down the corridor.
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